Heartbeatsby =ChisSweetArt

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One night to be confused
One night to speed up truth
We had a promise made
Four hands and then away
Both under influence
We had divine sense
To know what to say
Mind is a razorblade

To call for hands of above to lean on
Wouldn't be good enough for me, no

One night of magic rush
The start - a simple touch
One night to push and scream
And then relief
Ten days of perfect tunes
The colors red and blue
We had a promise made
We were in love

To call for hands of above to lean on
Wouldn't be good enough for me, no
To call for hands of above to lean on
Wouldn't be good enough for me, oh

And you, you knew the hand of a devil
And you kept us awake with wolves teeth
Sharing different heartbeats in one night

To call for hands of above to lean on
Wouldn't be good enough for me, no
To call for hands of above to lean on
Wouldn't be good enough for me, oh

~The Knife- Heartbeats

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Submitted on: July 12, 2012
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Critique by ~fares002 Jul 24, 2012, 2:28:31 AM

To speak about the photo, in and of itself, I must say that I sense that she has life experience ennough to know how to handle herself. Yet, the rejection and loneliness that she portrays is evident. She has walked into the moon lit room to be alone with her feelings. So she can figure out what she feels and how to react to them. The light orbs surrounding her, to me, are an extention of her. Her feelings were able to bring them into existance because she is indeed a magical person. The poem itself is a powerful message. Love is a powerful thing for both men and women. The poem itself made me think that she put all of her love into one person and that person had hurt her. It may have been from an arguement, it may have been from both of them maturing into different people, it culd mean so many different things. Yet, in the end she is still hurt and feels along in the world.

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