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Perfect Storm for Casting

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NOTE!: This is my re-touch of the image from the incredible critique from Vikki and the critique comment I received, I hope it looks better now.

Inspiration:
[link]

Also I miss Halloween and I miss my beloved Tablet it died today and I had to do this whole image with my laptop mouse. :cries:
I am really down about this, I hope you guys like it I'm iffy about it since it was done with mouse.

Detail: [link]

Stock Used:

Witch:

:iconelandria:

Witch Hat:

:iconwdwparksgal-stock:

Lantern:

:iconwammyp:

Crow:

:iconmomotte2stocks:

Jack O' Lanterns:

:iconravenarcana:

Moths:

:iconwingsofahero:

Veil:

:iconrevn89:

Rain:

:iconspiritsighs-stock:

Background One:

:iconashensorrow:

Background Two:

:icondiantha75:

I Painted:

Color Enhancement

Glow on object and girl

Glow on Lanterns

Lightning

Water Drops

Shadows

Rain glow

Makeup


You may not use this unless I give you permission.

Please leave comments and critiques... if you wish...
Image size
1400x1909px 3.14 MB
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Aelathen's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I find it as a beautiful and creative piece to be honest.
Vision : Very good, image is sharpened in some places but a bit blurred in others.
Originality : It is indeed very original, This stock is over used but yours stands out by making a more different one then the ones we see everywhere on dA.
Technique : Could be a bit better, the lightning is a bit wrong, for example try to make the background, the sky, sea etc a bit darker if you want to use those pumpkins and lanterns, you lightened up her chest but if we think a bit more (just an opinion) it couldnt get THAT bright in "evening lightning".
The veil could also be a bit better, make it more visible at the top of the hat and less visible at the ending, almost fading not vice-versa.
The stairs should remain in their original colors and not desaturated, also did you try to create fog? Because you just blurred the stairs and you shouldnt <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f…" width="15" height="15" alt=":(" title=":( (Sad)"/> and if you need better fog brushes note me and I send you!
And I see the moon on top, and that is a no-no when it rains xD.
Impact : Overall everything is beautiful just a few things that can be fixed if you still keep the PSD.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="38" height="15" alt=":hug:" title="Hug"/>